If... Perfection
I give you 10 bro, being an inspirational song to fit the story. I wonder though, based on what "JayJames" said, giving you a 4... I highly doubt his art skills or songwriting skills if he is going to criticize based on whether it was a love story or not, he just doesn't understand how deep it is, he is basing it off of "The way it should be" and not that it has it's own deep meaning... and for that, I finish with saying... Good Work and keep it up. Don't let retarded opinions stop you from amazing work.
~Leviathanz~